tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post4195581097271749267..comments2023-10-24T23:19:34.224+13:00Comments on St. Pius X - Room 3 Creations: Stomach AcheSPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-67150499064551160682010-08-03T19:26:53.746+12:002010-08-03T19:26:53.746+12:00You have been really successful in describing how ...You have been really successful in describing how we all feel when we have a stomach ache!<br /><br />Using a local landmark like Mission Bay in your poetry was a great choice too.<br /><br />Wonderful work everyone. Keep them coming, I LOVE poetry :)Mrs Lainghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02976986653801563062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-69129840730165386462010-07-29T07:53:09.587+12:002010-07-29T07:53:09.587+12:00WONDERFUL WORK!!!!
KEEP IT UP!!!
NitaWONDERFUL WORK!!!!<br /><br />KEEP IT UP!!!<br /><br />NitaNita!!http://www.room6.bogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-40899062571017494962010-07-26T12:32:28.093+12:002010-07-26T12:32:28.093+12:00Fantastic.
Your poem is very funny.
I really enjo...Fantastic.<br /><br />Your poem is very funny.<br />I really enjoy the part when you said like the waves at mission bay.<br /><br />Keep it up and hope to see more great poems from you guys.<br /><br />From Seini Siale and Melissa Hughleywww.spxroom7wordscraft.blogspot.comhttp://room7 wordscraftnoreply@blogger.com