tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post4229378189331941027..comments2023-10-24T23:19:34.224+13:00Comments on St. Pius X - Room 3 Creations: Our Mufti DaySPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-86138876132788296092010-09-04T17:44:05.369+12:002010-09-04T17:44:05.369+12:00very good macjeva, I like the way you put in your ...very good macjeva, I like the way you put in your feelings keep up the good work.<br /><br /><br />from JuliaJuliahttp://urlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-79840062112892158742010-09-04T10:46:07.805+12:002010-09-04T10:46:07.805+12:00What a wonderful recount of the Jump for Heart muf...What a wonderful recount of the Jump for Heart mufti day Macjeva!<br /><br />I really enjoyed reading it. You have organised your thoughts into paragraphs and have used a variety of words to start each of your sentences. <br /><br />Thank you also for sharing with us how you felt about the day. That adds interest and makes it fun to read.<br /><br />I'm sure the teachers were all proud of their classes. You all did a great job with your Jump Jam performances!<br /><br />I will be keeping a close eye on the blog for more of your writing :)Mrs Lainghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02976986653801563062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581430960719605247.post-33607252797428918262010-09-04T00:50:45.432+12:002010-09-04T00:50:45.432+12:00This was a great day Macjeva. You have shared you...This was a great day Macjeva. You have shared your experience well with your audience and I'm really pleased to see you starting to use paragraphing to help your audience understand each of your ideas. Keep up the good writing and the focus on your structure of your writing. <br />Miss G :-)Miss Ghttp://www.spxroom6.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com