When writing my description I made sure I used good adjectives so that my reader can imagine my dinosaur clearly. I really enjoyed publishing my movie as I was able to use the 'Paint' programme on the computer to illustrate my description.
Hi Margaret, The way you used carefully chosen adjectives to describe your dinosaur made it very easy to imagine what it must have looked like. And I really like the way you used your graphics to emphasise details - the closeup on its skin combined with your description was very effective. Mrs Burt
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Hi Margaret, The way you used carefully chosen adjectives to describe your dinosaur made it very easy to imagine what it must have looked like. And I really like the way you used your graphics to emphasise details - the closeup on its skin combined with your description was very effective.
Mrs Burt
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