Hey Lavinia ,Your work is outstanding. I really loved reading your work because yours is original. I really think your good but try making your story a little shorter so others can understand.
Hi LaviniaI like the title it sounds funny, you have made an outstanding story.Keep up the good work.
Hi Lavinia,I really enjoyed reading your Narrative. It was interesting how you had worte your Narrative, but try to write your story a little shorter so that people can understand you story.
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