We are the new Literacy Class of Room 6 for 2009!!
We have been back at school now for a week and we have been looking at recounts during our Written Language time. Here are a few of our favourite recounts from this week......
As I woke up this morning, BAMM! the sun shone brightly. "Ahhhhhhh" yawning my head off and taking a great, huge stretch. I got up and walked over to the bathroom very slowly like an old man. When I reached the bathroom I brushed my teeth using my toothbrush with toothpaste splattered ontop of my brush. "Chchchchchchchch" my toothbrush went, sounding like a train on traintracks going through my teeth. I finally finished brushing my teeth and I looked in the mirror and my teeth were sparkling like golden stars in the night.
Malia
The bell shrilled as it was 10:30am, morning tea time had started and all the students had grins on their faces. They rushed over to their bags to get their lunch and hurried outside to eat their scrumptious morning tea. They relaxed on the seats as the sun shone over them like hot boiling water was pouring down on them. Gloria pulled my arm so hard that it felt like she pulled my whole arm right off. We walked around the school and past the senior playground. The senior playground was crowded like a heap of ants on a piece of old, yucky bubble gum. We walked past the field and watched as the boys played with their sweaty, red faces and girls walked around.
Victoria
What an exhausting day it was! Birds chirping, sun shining bright and me feeling like ice-cream melting because it was so hot!
Walking to the church was very irritating as I was sweating like there was no tomorrow, but the weather was awesome to play in for the day. I hoped I could go for a swim so I could cool down a bit!
Step by step......walking so slowly, didn't know how long I could survive in the weather. Finally two steps away.......and then reached the front of the church. I just flopped down and relaxed till it was time to go home!!
Tyra
15 comments:
Hello to the new Room 6
Lovely to meet you.
I have really enjoyed reading your recounts. I really don't feel like that is enough though - they have all made me keen to read more. Tyra I REALLY want to know what that was all about. Give us more....
And Brenna, Hifo and Simone, I enjoyed reading your comments on your 'old' class blog. Glad you are enjoying your new class. You will have a great year with Miss Gleeson.
All the best for 2009
Mrs Burt
Hello the NEW room6.
I relly liked reading these recouts.
I would like to say to keep working hard and represent room6 with pride.
TUITUPOU
Hi Room 6,
That was a great first post for the year. I look forward to reading more of your work! Have a great year.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10 @ Pt England School
NICE WORK ROOM 6...
I HOPE I CAN SEE MORE WORK
FROM THE NEW ROOM 6..
KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB.
CASEY MCDERMOTT
Brilliant!! Malia, Victoria and Tyra. Your writing is extremely clever. I especially enjoyed reading Victoria's recount of her morning tea time.
Miss G
Extrordinary!!!
cool writing Malia,Tyra and toria.I really loved reading all of your writing.It was really enjoyable.
anita
Awsome!!! Malia I liked how you similies in your morning. And I liked victoria and tyra's work to From Paul.
Cool!!! writing tori thats the best writing ive ever red i enjoyed reading it sis
robert
marvellous!!!! i enjoy everything and your work is awesome i really ejoyed your stories and your blog
from emelia vave
Wow!! Victoria your writing was funny becuase your writing gives me the giggles. I've enjoyed what you wrote.
from Jessica
Marvellous!! victoria it was fantastic you got a good future ahead of you from Semaia
Miss Gleeson.
I am really looking forward to following your class online this year. I am sure the new Room Six will thrill, entertain and most of all educate us.
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand.
Dear Room Six
Our students in Hamilton were very excited to have our first comments from an Auckland School left on the site. We would like to put a link to your page on our class page. Could you please leave a comment and let us know if that will be alright.
Room Eight, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton.
Intereting words Tyra about melting because it was so hot,I loved it when you said step by step walking so slowy, that was a really good story. keep up with the good writing.Oh and good orientation!!.
I really enjoyed reading your interesting recounts Room 6. Malia your description of your shining teeth made me smile. Victoria your recount made me feel as if I was walking beside you too. Tyra through your description I could feel the heat of the day. Well done! Fantastic writing! I look forward to reading some more of your writing this year.
Mrs Benade
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