Saturday, February 27, 2010

Kahlanie's Recount

I have been trying to work on my 'Past Tense' and make sure that my recount is interesting.

On a hot blazing Monday morning the bell rang like usual, ringing loud and clear as if it was demanding orders. All of us were rushing out to get our nutricious meals.

Another bell rang for play time. All I did was just stand there watching the kids play, it was very boring. Everybody was yelling in my ears and they got sore, it was like they wanted to explode.

The hand bell rang I said to myself "what a waste of time!". I slowly walked back to class, everybody else was running around screaming at the top of their voices. Suddenly I saw Miss G.....so I ran as fast as I could. I made it before the second bell rang.

6 comments:

spxroom6 said...

A great recount Kahlanie, I'm looking forward to seeing what you can produce for you next piece of writing.

Robertanna said...

cool work kahlanie. It was soiled bro.

Robertanna

iasinita said...

shot kahlanie

dat was SOLID!:):)

Katie Allsup said...

Hey Kahlanie,
My name is Katie, I am a junior here at the University of South Alabama; I am in EDM 310 class with Dr. Strange. I really enjoyed your blog post about you working on your past tense. When I was younger, I had trouble with my past tense as well. Keep up the good work, and you will do great! You can check out my blog at allsupkatieedm310.blogspot.com
Thank you for sharing your post!

Katie

Paperclip said...

Love it, and as the others are saying, I'm looking forward to your next piece of writing.

paulc said...

Hi Kahlani
I also enjoyed your writing. Great descriptive language. Keep writing as much as you can.