On Wednesday my Mum and Aunty were gone to get some food. I was wondering why they were gone so long. When they came back I saw Mc Donalds and K.F.C. My Mum shared it out. We ate hard core. When I finished my McDonalds I ate K.F.C. I ate in the living room.
While I was eating I saw my little sister’s chips and there was still more. So I sneaked and ate it all up. Just then I went to eat my chicken and chips (K.F.C).When I finished I got a lemonade and had a gulp of it. After that I went and put it in the fridge. After a while I went and at down and watched television.
My highlight was eating my little sisters McDonalds chips....mmmmmmmmm.
By Robertanna
4 comments:
You are making us hungry!!! Maybe next time you could get Burger King and Pizza Hut....and send some to Room 5 at Tamaki Primary School. Great Story Robertanna!
Well done Robertanna!
I liked the way you, said, so long?" It makes us think, that you are good at thinking aloud.
You make Me and Timote, really hungary. Keep up the great work!
Moli and Timote.
Well done.
Shaianne and I really liked the way you described how long your mun and aunty went.
We are sure that you enjoyed your meal.
keep up the great writing and hope to read more enjoyable stories.
Shaianne and Seini Siale
WELL I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR WRITING ROBERTANNA CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
BY EMELIA
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