Saturday, July 24, 2010

Old Poem

People are cold,
When they are old.

Floppy and sloppy,
Wrinkled and spotty.

Old people clean,
If they are keen.

Floppy and sloppy.
Wrinkled and spotty.

2 comments:

Nita said...

GOOD WORK!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!

Nita

Mrs Laing said...

You have chosen interesting words with very strong imagery to describe old people!

It is lovely to see everyone's poetry on the blog. Keep it up, I want to read more :)