Saturday, July 24, 2010

Stomach Ache

I've got a really bad stomach ache,
Which makes me stay awake.

Yelling and complaining,
Crying and fainting.

It grumbles everyday,
Like the waves at Mission Bay.

Yelling and complaining,
Crying and fainting.

3 comments:

www.spxroom7wordscraft.blogspot.com said...

Fantastic.

Your poem is very funny.
I really enjoy the part when you said like the waves at mission bay.

Keep it up and hope to see more great poems from you guys.

From Seini Siale and Melissa Hughley

Nita!! said...

WONDERFUL WORK!!!!

KEEP IT UP!!!

Nita

Mrs Laing said...

You have been really successful in describing how we all feel when we have a stomach ache!

Using a local landmark like Mission Bay in your poetry was a great choice too.

Wonderful work everyone. Keep them coming, I LOVE poetry :)