Fantastic.Your poem is very funny.I really enjoy the part when you said like the waves at mission bay.Keep it up and hope to see more great poems from you guys.From Seini Siale and Melissa Hughley
WONDERFUL WORK!!!!KEEP IT UP!!!Nita
You have been really successful in describing how we all feel when we have a stomach ache!Using a local landmark like Mission Bay in your poetry was a great choice too.Wonderful work everyone. Keep them coming, I LOVE poetry :)
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Fantastic.
Your poem is very funny.
I really enjoy the part when you said like the waves at mission bay.
Keep it up and hope to see more great poems from you guys.
From Seini Siale and Melissa Hughley
WONDERFUL WORK!!!!
KEEP IT UP!!!
Nita
You have been really successful in describing how we all feel when we have a stomach ache!
Using a local landmark like Mission Bay in your poetry was a great choice too.
Wonderful work everyone. Keep them coming, I LOVE poetry :)
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